Students‘ Essays

Writing an academic essay means creating ideas into an argument. The basic university student essay has following standardized structure:
paragraph 1 – introduction
paragraph 2 – body
paragraph 3 – conclusion

dr.streda-format-essay

Credit issuing will take place on Tuesday, May 21, 2019 at 2:00 PM and on Thursday, May 30, 2019 at 10:00 AM in the Purkyne´s Institute Large Auditorium (Purkyňův ústav, velká posluchárna), Albertov 4, Prague 2.

To get credits you need to:
1) Reply questions under each lecture video on Youtube (as a comment).
2) Write thesis (essay at least 2 pages A4) and submit it on this webpage. How to upload essay to the system:

Open the website www.streda.com and click on the tab English –> Students‘ Essays.

At the end of the page (at the bottom) there is space for Comment („Napsat komentář“). Upload your seminar work there according to the instructions in the following picture.

1. Enter the text of your work into the „Comment/Komentář“ field.
2. Type your first name and last name into the „Name/Jméno“ field.
3. Send the seminar work by clicking on „Send Comment/Odeslat komentář“.
Leave the other two fields blank.
If the work is okay, your comment will be approved.

78 komentářů u „Students‘ Essays

  1. Kravchenko Vladimir

    Introduction – The state of Health Education in the Public education system in Israel
    Israel as relative new country with many different ethnic backgrounds has a public school and university system, in which the vast majority of students will undergo their studies, shaping them to the citizens of tomorrow. It is evident in recent years, that emphasis on health education and the importance of it has declined to almost non-existence in the country, influencing the society and it’s future citizens.
    Body
    Due to recent changes in the 2000 century, mainly influenced by political clashes resulting primarily from within the country, the public school system doesn’t emphasize the importance of health, and there are currently no active classes or even seminars in public schools and high schools (excluding some universities and higher education institutes) that teach young children and high school children about basic topics that every growing to-be adult should know, like the importance of diet , exercise, and being abstinent from smoking. It is evident due to multiple researches in the last few years that the average school kid in the country usually disregards his diet completely. While some teenagers are indeed participating of various kinds of sports, most spend their time at home playing video games or consuming other passive media. According to multiple polls, the rise of tobacco use in teenagers is increasing every year, and starting in a younger age, resulting in possibly many adults that smoke. This of course, is relevant to which part of Israel the teenager grows up in – The more peripheral you are to the center and Tel Aviv area, the more likely you are to start smoking or even abuse drugs as a minor. This is due to the absolute discrepancy resulting from a system that is mainly Public and under-regulated from the ministry of education, that puts emphasis in other areas of education that are viewed by the majority as irrelevant, like religious studies.
    Conclusion
    Due to many miscalculations done by the ministry of education in Israel, the general public of students in high schools and schools are not educated in Health and lifestyle as to be excepted. unlike their peers in developed countries (Most of the countries in the EU, for instance) it creates a future of unhealthy adults that are likely to put a constraint on the , also public, health system. In order to prevent that , In my opinion it is wise to regulate the ministry of education itself by an outer committee, and thus maybe some day the students will be more knowledgeable about such an important topic like their health and lifestyle.
    78090786 ISIC , group 2055

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